New FULL garypagetwo song: FAILSTYLE (Warning: FAIL SONG)

Discussion in 'The Bar' started by garypagetwo, Nov 6, 2013.

  1. garypagetwo

    garypagetwo The Gun

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    I feel like crying. I was happy with the music when i made it but the vocals failed completely :( not even in a funny way. I was going to scrap the whole thing but decided to just make it anyways. This song completely failed so im sorry :( it's not what garypagetwo styleâ„¢ is all about.

    [video=youtube;c8yeqhI-SB8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c8yeqhI-SB8[/video]
     
  2. face palm

    face palm Well-Known Member

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    :jj: no need for the fail warning
     
  3. fletchman71

    fletchman71 Well-Known Member

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    Gary, can you please do a remake to this song?
    [video=youtube;E-WHW-QNswE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E-WHW-QNswE[/video]
     
  4. basketcase

    basketcase Pissed that Naz only has 2 legs

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    I liked it!
     
  5. face palm

    face palm Well-Known Member

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    no bass :jj:
     
  6. A Succulent Chinese Meal

    A Succulent Chinese Meal What is the charge?

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    Five star song, five star thread, five star poster!
     
  7. A Succulent Chinese Meal

    A Succulent Chinese Meal What is the charge?

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    "Taking over nations one at a time with mental masturbation!"
     
  8. Ralph

    Ralph Don't Tread On Me

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    Nice. 8 out of 10
    I like when you make these threads
    Ok now my critique

    I like the " Mick Ronson" guitar sound
    The bass was tight although don't introduce it anymore. " bring da bass back" :nono:
    Try not to syncopate the bass line with the guitar riff so much. Less is more and try to play the lower 5th as an alternate note when vocals are not present as a fill.
    If you mix the guitar in one channel, bass vocals and drums in both it will sound more defined and allow for overdubs to stand out more.

    You def have a gift for this


    ps Oderus knows squat about music :c
     
  9. Oderus

    Oderus Going to hell VIP

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    Not bad. You should exaggerate your fake accent more though.
     
  10. Oderus

    Oderus Going to hell VIP

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    shut the fuck up, ralph
     
  11. Lou Loomis

    Lou Loomis Feel the Gern

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    :jazz:

    best one yet.
     
  12. Lou Loomis

    Lou Loomis Feel the Gern

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    I'm all in when Gary prefaces stuff with "I feel like crying..."
     
  13. Gitfiddle

    Gitfiddle Live Deliciously

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    Yeah, Gary is definitely from Norway. Uh huh. Sure.
     
  14. Ralph

    Ralph Don't Tread On Me

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    so mean :down:
     
  15. DogStar69

    DogStar69 Well-Known Member

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    Gary sounds like Elias :dontknow:
     
  16. ice cream

    ice cream Well-Known Member VIP

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    made me laugh
     
  17. A Succulent Chinese Meal

    A Succulent Chinese Meal What is the charge?

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    Min søte Gary, jeg er en attraktiv fett kvinne og jeg ønsker å sitte på ditt ansikt og kveler du
     
  18. Schmoopy

    Schmoopy Shit Mult Hunter Gold

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    gilaet Grandiosa Kjøttboller Gold

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    [video=youtube;xwm-nPFPSis]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xwm-nPFPSis[/video]
     
  20. Orgy Pants

    Orgy Pants teklife

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    needs some ryan lever vocals.